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Well a relatively boring piece, but whatever I like it. Just messing around.

What can be improved???

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:iconcometstarz:
Beautiful!

I think a good idea would be to...
=P
I can't think of any to tell the truth!

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:iconlequark:
wonderful, but the "fluid" around the world are too sharp..
I like the format!!
:iconths-acid:
Around the little world or the giant supernova?

Thanks mate.

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:iconths-acid:
Haha, thanks for the comment.

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:iconlequark:
the giant supernova =)
:iconanzelwolveine:
Why are all the stars seeming to shoot upwards? It just seems a little peculiar to me...also, what are the visible dotted lines that appear upon the surface of the planet/sun? They don't match with the actual curves of the sphere, so that's a bit distracting. The area on the top right of the planet, where there are some random darker squiggles, it would benefit from a bit more shadowing and detail. Also, on the bottom, I'd say the same thing: Needs a bit more detail.

The asteroid belt of sorts is kind-of out of place --- not that bad, to be honest, but it just doesn't seem to fit with the picture. The one on the bottom right corner, though, fits much better. And maybe the circling moon/planet could be a bit more oddly shaped? With such a turbulent planet/sun, you'd expect maybe a bump in the surface or something...just an idea.

Hope you don't mind my crit :x It's a beautiful piece, but you asked for criticism, so I was as honest as I could be.

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:iconths-acid:
Of course I don't mind critique. How else would I get better? :thumbsup: Also all of the stars shooting up was just mainly something I was screwing around with and it looked kinda cool, so I kept it. Also I really don't know where those dotted lines came from but I will clone them out and resubmit here very soon.

Also I will see if I can add some more solar flares or something. Thanks mate.

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:iconths-acid:
Ok I will see what I can do.

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:iconanzelwolveine:
No problem :3

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