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Well a relatively boring piece, but whatever I like it. Just messing around.

What can be improved???

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May 16, 2009
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:iconbaz135:
The shadow on the little planet. I know fading all the way to black is realistic, but it makes it more visually appealing have detail still visible in the shadows. It also seems a little too abrupt. Also, maybe you could have some fire trails coming off from the planet, from the power of the star? The background seems a tad too empty, I know the focus is on the star but it feels like you need something there. Another thing...two asteroid belt? Looks a bit odd. And what are those weird upwards moving things supposed to be?
Lol, might be getting a bit nitpicky here, so I'll wrap it up. Great work on the star, love the flares emanating from it :)
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~Bigleedaboss Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this
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:iconsxnill:
Mood: Love ~Sxnill Mar 22, 2013   Digital Artist
In my opinion the star field in the background could be sharpened a little more but because of the closeness of the relative star, the stars would be harder to see. Great detail overall!
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Mood: Wow! ~Albimalek Mar 5, 2013  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Nice :)
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!spartanjedi Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
is that a blue supergiant?
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:iconaceshd:
Mood: Wow! ~acesHD Mar 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
a very nice scene...great skills :D
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:icontorath121:
This better be a great puzzle!!! I ordered it as one for my friend :)
Love the colors~
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:icondivinityspaceart:
Mood: Joy *DivinitySpaceArt Nov 4, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
O.O O.O O.O......omg that is sweet man!![link]
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~theHybridEffect Oct 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is badass! Any tutorials you would recommend for making Stars like that?
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:icondazhouhui2004:
~dazhouhui2004 Sep 6, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
If this is boring, then my work is insufferably lame. XD

Beautiful work with the supernova. :clap: Other than the fact that the surrounding tiny stars of the background seem a bit faded, I can't say if there is any more I would add to this magificent art. :) I especially love the way that the solar flares and the entire blindingly bright impression just stands out so intensely, and the way that the asteroids and the shooting stars (comets?) around the center add to the work.
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:iconths-acid:
Lol. I am very glad you like this piece. I noticed the stars after I submitted it. I struggle quite a tremendous amount when it comes to making star-fields and stars in general so please forgive me if it is poor quality of work.

Thanks for the comment!
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