The shadow on the little planet. I know fading all the way to black is realistic, but it makes it more visually appealing have detail still visible in the shadows. It also seems a little too abrupt. Also, maybe you could have some fire trails coming off from the planet, from the power of the star? The background seems a tad too empty, I know the focus is on the star but it feels like you need something there. Another thing...two asteroid belt? Looks a bit odd. And what are those weird upwards moving things supposed to be? Lol, might be getting a bit nitpicky here, so I'll wrap it up. Great work on the star, love the flares emanating from it
In my opinion the star field in the background could be sharpened a little more but because of the closeness of the relative star, the stars would be harder to see. Great detail overall!
If this is boring, then my work is insufferably lame. XD
Beautiful work with the supernova. Other than the fact that the surrounding tiny stars of the background seem a bit faded, I can't say if there is any more I would add to this magificent art. I especially love the way that the solar flares and the entire blindingly bright impression just stands out so intensely, and the way that the asteroids and the shooting stars (comets?) around the center add to the work.
Lol. I am very glad you like this piece. I noticed the stars after I submitted it. I struggle quite a tremendous amount when it comes to making star-fields and stars in general so please forgive me if it is poor quality of work.
Lol, might be getting a bit nitpicky here, so I'll wrap it up. Great work on the star, love the flares emanating from it
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
Please sign up or login to post a critique.